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Heart
The darkest chasms hold
secrets of my soul
in the shape of my
coniferous cone
I lick your frivolous flames
douse them with my tongue
even so, you can't stay
in a wooden box anymore
You discarded mine for those
growing fondly around us
better shaped
unlike mine
When days were miracles
we carried our hearts
as trophies
Hearts fail and wither with the passing of time
Wishes, hopes, faith and love all wither together
But not this
coniferous cone
the shape of my heart
which you replaced
with a forest of your own
secrets of my soul
in the shape of my
coniferous cone
I lick your frivolous flames
douse them with my tongue
even so, you can't stay
in a wooden box anymore
You discarded mine for those
growing fondly around us
better shaped
unlike mine
When days were miracles
we carried our hearts
as trophies
Hearts fail and wither with the passing of time
Wishes, hopes, faith and love all wither together
But not this
coniferous cone
the shape of my heart
which you replaced
with a forest of your own
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Re: Heart
6th Aug 2013 7:45pm
re: Re: Heart
7th Aug 2013 9:16pm
thank you rain... didnt really expect this outcome...
inspired by another DUP poet's work. :D
inspired by another DUP poet's work. :D
Re: Heart
Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 00:39am
This was so wonderfully written
Well penned
An enjoyable read....
Well penned
An enjoyable read....
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Re: Heart
Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 8:20am
This is wonderfully written. So many perfect lines. Beautiful, cher.
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re: Re: Heart
7th Aug 2013 9:18pm
Re: Heart
7th Aug 2013 7:13pm
re: Re: Heart
7th Aug 2013 9:19pm
well, i sort of mixed in another inspiration with what i got from you... :D
thank you
thank you
Re: Heart
Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 1:38am
Absolutely beautiful.... Really Enjoyed!
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Re: Heart
15th Aug 2013 7:49am
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16th Aug 2013 5:30pm
Re: Heart
Anonymous
21st Sep 2013 00:15am
Breathtakingly beautiful and a perfect image to go with the piece, well done!
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Anonymous
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5th Jul 2019 8:23pm
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Re: Re. Heart
10th Jul 2019 8:36am
Re. Heart
It seems you were reading my work as I was reading yours. Cheers to another great write... Haven't seen much from you recently. Hope you are doing well!
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Re: Re. Heart
28th Sep 2020 8:25am
omg this is eerie as fuck. you even commented the same thing i sent you a message about haha.
thanks so much!
thanks so much!