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Solace
Bound to inescapable fate,
tormented and stripped of innocence,
You idolize the warmth of suicide's lies.
Holding onto your forsaken spirit,
at the edge of eternal fade;
awaiting a dream of hope to revive
your battered mind, before your integrity dies.
Years of anger hidden,
reclining the homicidal rage you lust.
Succumbed by your immortal failure,
your guilt never free of destructive rape.
Devour this charm of darkness,
The romance in your vengeance,
will burn the memories from your mind.
On the brink of insanity's transformation,
All carnage angels sing for you.
Believe in this solace, the serene here is real.
Journey through this fire upon you,
The evil of your demise sleeps within it's flames.
Release your starvation throughout your veins,
enjoy the kill.
tormented and stripped of innocence,
You idolize the warmth of suicide's lies.
Holding onto your forsaken spirit,
at the edge of eternal fade;
awaiting a dream of hope to revive
your battered mind, before your integrity dies.
Years of anger hidden,
reclining the homicidal rage you lust.
Succumbed by your immortal failure,
your guilt never free of destructive rape.
Devour this charm of darkness,
The romance in your vengeance,
will burn the memories from your mind.
On the brink of insanity's transformation,
All carnage angels sing for you.
Believe in this solace, the serene here is real.
Journey through this fire upon you,
The evil of your demise sleeps within it's flames.
Release your starvation throughout your veins,
enjoy the kill.
Published 12th Dec 2010
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13th Dec 2010 3:51am
2nd Feb 2012 1:00am
a lot of reaching in here! abuse of the thesaurus, misuse of conjunctions, and no need for the punctuation. thats why it's not continuous. each break signifies the stoppage. "the evil of"your" demise sleeps within "it's" flames" if it's yours then anything "it" possesses is also yours. so 'the flames' not It's... i could go on but... this is beyond repair. sorri
