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Untouched

Your thoughts
and my heart

A short
and upheaving
realisation

Written by jagracia

Published 20th Jul 2013

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Re: Untouched

21st Jul 2013 00:39am

Upheaving?! Jag,
you're good.

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- Edited 21st Jul 2013 2:51pm

21st Jul 2013 1:43am

I'm trying to brink back the old words.

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Re: Untouched

Anonymous

23rd Jul 2013 3:29pm

Like the realization of a connection
that is there...

23rd Jul 2013 4:37pm

Precisely.

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Re: Untouched

25th Jul 2013 6:55pm

...yes, the "upheaving" word -
really gives the poem strength....

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25th Jul 2013 6:57pm

thanks

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