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Re: Haiku X
20th Jul 2013 4:54pm
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I'm moving into the erotic direction ... haikuwise :-)! Lovely comment for which I thank you so much!!
Re: Haiku X
Anonymous
20th Jul 2013 4:59pm
Very nice, delicate, and has a
sensual feel...
sensual feel...

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re: Re: Haiku X
20th Jul 2013 5:22pm
Re: Haiku X
Anonymous
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20th Jul 2013 5:00pm
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Glad you stopped by to read the haiku! I much appreciate your comment! Thank you! A real Basketball Phrase? I didn't know that!
Re: Haiku X
20th Jul 2013 9:49pm
her wings brush my lips
her hair falls over my cheeks
love takes flight again
thanks, chiyo....
her hair falls over my cheeks
love takes flight again
thanks, chiyo....
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re: Re: Haiku X
20th Jul 2013 10:53pm
Re: Haiku X
Anonymous
20th Jul 2013 11:18pm
"Don't rebound," indeed! :)
Great haiku, Iris. Imaginative, thought provoking & love the pic, too.
*Peace* Carlene
Great haiku, Iris. Imaginative, thought provoking & love the pic, too.
*Peace* Carlene

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Re: Haiku X
20th Jul 2013 11:55pm