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Paradigm Shift
Infinity, my ecstasy
Endless morphing galaxies
Birth of light, photon flight
Supernova, heart's delight
Elements configurate
Relevance just dissipates
Waves on waves, and ceaseless tide
Nature never breaks its stride
In this world I'm finally free,
A drop of water in the sea.
Endless morphing galaxies
Birth of light, photon flight
Supernova, heart's delight
Elements configurate
Relevance just dissipates
Waves on waves, and ceaseless tide
Nature never breaks its stride
In this world I'm finally free,
A drop of water in the sea.
Published 17th Jul 2013
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17th Jul 2013 6:51am
18th Jul 2013 11:05am
17th Jul 2013 12:56pm
v nice.it may sound finer rhythmic if you wrote
(nature never break stride)to be more harmonizing with the above-line,without any grammatical abuse if you view (nature)as a sum of multifarious things.
(nature never break stride)to be more harmonizing with the above-line,without any grammatical abuse if you view (nature)as a sum of multifarious things.
18th Jul 2013 11:04am
thanks for the suggestion. also, multifarious, good word. I have a thing for words :)
Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 2:54pm
Great rhythm Bliss, eally Enjoyed!
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