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Unloved
No wonder no one likes you
You’re impossible to love.
No wonder no one wants you
You're gross.
The sooner you’re gone, the better
We won’t have to look at you
The sooner you’re dead
The happier we’ll be
Even you.
You’re impossible to love.
No wonder no one wants you
You're gross.
The sooner you’re gone, the better
We won’t have to look at you
The sooner you’re dead
The happier we’ll be
Even you.
Published 2nd Dec 2010
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2nd Dec 2010 4:27am
so sad but im sure many people think this way just a shame no one can tell them how great they are
2nd Dec 2010 10:07am
I understand the sentiment. I think most people have thought that about someone at some point in their lives. Or maybe they have been on the receiving end, from a stranger or worse a loved one.
Your piece makes me wonder what drives you to write this. Who hurt you, or pissed you off or if it's just something that came out.
Thanks for the read!
Your piece makes me wonder what drives you to write this. Who hurt you, or pissed you off or if it's just something that came out.
Thanks for the read!
2nd Dec 2010 11:41pm
I had some stuff going on and this was just running through my mind, hence I wrote it down <:) hehe thank you
9th Dec 2010 9:22am
We would all be unloved if people found out our true persons.
I like how you direct the poem at the reader. He becomes involved in the poem itself.
Good job.
I like how you direct the poem at the reader. He becomes involved in the poem itself.
Good job.
9th Dec 2010 10:32pm
