DADA FISH

Thanks. I try to strip
a thought down to
it's underwear, but
it isn't always pretty
or clever!  thanks
again for bothering
with me.

I like this type of stuff hahaha...
 
You can't always be a genius,but when you are it'll be simply sublime!

Thanks, I'm never sure of
what I'm doing but then
who is, I guess ..

I wasn't saying this wasn't good btw...I was actually talking to D 8 in my first reply most...
 
It reminds me of the old movie Aurther.He says:I often wonder,fish must get awfully tired of seafood...=)

actually this is a very good minimalistic (at least my idea of minimalistic) poem.  i read it, and at first i didn't really get anything from it.  but reading it again...and again...and maybe with some help from Fenom's last comment, i find it to be an excellent way of painting how we can get tired of the things that make up the core of our daily lives.  it doesn't drone on and on and on and on and on--it spares us what that might be...simplicity can be a great thing.

Thanks Patrick. If we had full realisation
of every breath of air inhaled and
exhaled merely to support life in this
particular form, what a drag...

This made me laugh! Thank you!!!! :)

Glad you enjoyed, thanks:)