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my friend said if there had been
so
many school holidays when he
was a kid,
he would have gone more,
he
doesn't realize how
funny he is, it's
a pity he's not
writing this poem,
isn't it
as for me today, I'm walking
by the river,
the
sunlight is crazy
for the water,
it flashes and glitters,
and it's taking
me to
where I can go to
what else is there?
Published 12th Jul 2013
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Anonymous
14th Jul 2013 10:36pm
I remember way back when I couldn't wait for school to end. Now, like you a nice walk, glistening water. When nature speaks, the best poems unfold. :)
15th Jul 2013 00:24am
18th Jul 2013 9:24pm
hmm,
i'm really digging your style, again
just the way you write
i mean i've only read two of your poems so far, but your just point blank attitude is amazing,
i have a few parts to this one i really loved,
i will defiantly be checking out more of your stuff, and i'm not just subscribing, because you did for me first, i'm doing it, because i can't wait to see what else you come up with
=].
i'm really digging your style, again
just the way you write
i mean i've only read two of your poems so far, but your just point blank attitude is amazing,
i have a few parts to this one i really loved,
i will defiantly be checking out more of your stuff, and i'm not just subscribing, because you did for me first, i'm doing it, because i can't wait to see what else you come up with
=].
18th Jul 2013 9:53pm
Cool. But believe in YOURSELF, yeah. I never have. Big mistake. But also ignore advice. lol.
