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I drink deeply[/font]
of my obsession[/font]
painfully aware[/font]
of my own
wretchedness[/font]
no one has to know[/font]
but
I know[/font]
and that is sad enough[/font]
I guess…....[/font]
but it is too late
now
[/font]to keep up
appearances.[/font]
[/font]
secrets….known
only to me[/font]
like
how I see
just this one[/font]
and no other[/font]
shrieking that
name[/font]
if only
in my mind....[/font]
through a dozen
tiny orgasms[/font]
I shudder[/font]
fold myself into
stiff, icy sheets[/font]
and
smile[/font]
drifting into
emptiness[/font]
dreaming of
candy bars[/font]
and
rest stops[/font]
and
you.....[/font]
of my obsession[/font]
painfully aware[/font]
of my own
wretchedness[/font]
no one has to know[/font]
but
I know[/font]
and that is sad enough[/font]
I guess…....[/font]
but it is too late
now
[/font]to keep up
appearances.[/font]
[/font]
secrets….known
only to me[/font]
like
how I see
just this one[/font]
and no other[/font]
shrieking that
name[/font]
if only
in my mind....[/font]
through a dozen
tiny orgasms[/font]
I shudder[/font]
fold myself into
stiff, icy sheets[/font]
and
smile[/font]
drifting into
emptiness[/font]
dreaming of
candy bars[/font]
and
rest stops[/font]
and
you.....[/font]
Published 29th Nov 2010
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29th Nov 2010 4:01pm
I am truly left speechless. I am awed by this piece. The phrase "dreaming of candy bars and rest stops and you..."
Uneffingbelievable. I am in love with your words.
Uneffingbelievable. I am in love with your words.
29th Nov 2010 6:13pm
Whoa, thank you so much....I am both humbled and flattered. I am in love with your comments... :)
29th Nov 2010 7:05pm
Somerset Maugham said that, "The love that lasts longest is the love that is never returned."
He was right and you've captured that terrible and secret vexation beautifully. thank you.
cheers from the emerald coast.
He was right and you've captured that terrible and secret vexation beautifully. thank you.
cheers from the emerald coast.
30th Nov 2010 12:47pm
So true....I find unrequited love to be the driving force behind the majority of poetry (art in general actually), including mine. Ooooh, "terrible and secret vexation"-I love the way that sounds. :) Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment; I am flattered.
30th Nov 2010 1:08pm
i think we have another winner, ladies and gentlemen! you're good, Marciline, quite good at this. [:
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