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Lost in thought
Depression, sadness call it what you will
I want to jump off the window sill
Into water and drown away
Until I have nothing left to say
.
I want to jump off the window sill
Into water and drown away
Until I have nothing left to say
.
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29th Nov 2010 4:57am
great
Anonymous
29th Nov 2010 6:20am
comes from the heart.
the last line is a bit awkward sounding to me though.. the rest is absolutely amazing.
the last line is a bit awkward sounding to me though.. the rest is absolutely amazing.
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Yey!
29th Nov 2010 8:06am
Thank you so much >:)
Yes I agree, I shall work on it find something snazzy to replace the last line
sincerely, me *__*
Yes I agree, I shall work on it find something snazzy to replace the last line
sincerely, me *__*
Nothing more to be said
30th Nov 2010 2:57am
:)!
30th Nov 2010 6:17am
Thank you so much, I really appreciate that it's good to know you like it >:) hehe
sincerely, me. ^^
sincerely, me. ^^
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30th Nov 2010 5:37pm
~courtsey~
1st Dec 2010 00:43am
Witty
9th Dec 2010 9:34am
=^.^=
9th Dec 2010 10:30pm
L.A.
19th Jan 2011 1:09pm
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2019 3:45am
25th Apr 2012 1:35pm
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