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said the sun to the moon, “you’re bright.”
said the moon to the cheese, “you’re wise.”
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patrickbirdener
(Patrick Birdener)
Published
4th Jul 2013
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Hashman
4th Jul 2013 12:30pm
very observant :)
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patrickbirdener
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6th Jul 2013 6:22am
thank you.
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