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DEAD
Sucking
the
life
outta
me
draining
my
sweet
flavor
I
slap
it
DEAD
Now
scratching
the
itch
and
cursing
Sneaking
up
on
me
another
noisy
bastard
lands
but
doesn't
sink
in
I
slap
it
DEAD
As
I
sit
waiting
for
another
attack
I
wonder
why
the
hell
Noah
saved
the
damn
pests
DAMN
THE
MOSQUITO
the
life
outta
me
draining
my
sweet
flavor
I
slap
it
DEAD
Now
scratching
the
itch
and
cursing
Sneaking
up
on
me
another
noisy
bastard
lands
but
doesn't
sink
in
I
slap
it
DEAD
As
I
sit
waiting
for
another
attack
I
wonder
why
the
hell
Noah
saved
the
damn
pests
DAMN
THE
MOSQUITO
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Anonymous
4th Jul 2013 2:27am
Ears deep in them here til...nice write
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4th Jul 2013 2:41am
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Anonymous
4th Jul 2013 5:02am
Say AAAAAAAAAMEN AAAAAAAAAMEN! Mosquitos are terrible here as are fire ants and humungous tree roaches but they don't hurt anyone they're just hella scary. Oh and I been bitten three times this year by wasps.
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4th Jul 2013 7:58am
Funny I read it as a metaphor for people ... Okay not ALL people ... politicians - lawyers -reality TV HOUSEWIVES OF (you pick the city) ...
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5th Jul 2013 00:16am
the other creatures need them for food like the birds.....we might eat em...heheh
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