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Sowing My Seeds Of Love
I sow a lovely garden
take my time with each
seed, I watch with careful
eyes and caring hands as
their buds unfold, stretching
to the sun for warmth and
drinking every drop as it
showers, my beautiful flowers
that I have grown
take my time with each
seed, I watch with careful
eyes and caring hands as
their buds unfold, stretching
to the sun for warmth and
drinking every drop as it
showers, my beautiful flowers
that I have grown
Published 3rd Jul 2013
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3rd Jul 2013 5:14pm
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3rd Jul 2013 5:21pm
You may have green fingers , tommie... or on the other hand this may be a metaphor of your readers...either way , its a nice poem.
3rd Jul 2013 5:53pm
forget the metaphor...I've tried every combination and none work...seeds/poems ...sun/readers etc...etc..so I guess its the greens fingers after all.
3rd Jul 2013 7:12pm
This poem is about my children, my greatest creations!
Thank you for reading and commenting Nightmoth, BTW..love your name!
Thank you for reading and commenting Nightmoth, BTW..love your name!
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2013 6:30pm
lovely poem tl...strider!
3rd Jul 2013 7:31pm
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3rd Jul 2013 7:40pm
There are so many wonderful interpretations of this which makes it great ...
... Lovely
LSP
... Lovely
LSP
3rd Jul 2013 7:47pm
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2013 8:27pm
Simple elegance! You should post a pic of your garden...flower garden :)
3rd Jul 2013 10:21pm
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2013 10:50pm
Okay so now that I know it's about you kids and I read your Nightmoth comment the beauty is enhanced 10 fold
3rd Jul 2013 11:43pm
3rd Jul 2013 9:53pm
Lovely metaphor for one's children, now I have seen your reply to Nightmoth.
3rd Jul 2013 10:22pm
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4th Jul 2013 1:18am
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 3:54am
Just occured to me
Can this not also be true for sustaining hardness?
Sowing seeds of loving hardness
Hmmm
Suffice to say
Thanks for this poem
Can this not also be true for sustaining hardness?
Sowing seeds of loving hardness
Hmmm
Suffice to say
Thanks for this poem
