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You
You make me want to be good
instead of bad
sweet
instead of sour
your smile makes me fly
without wings
and your laugh
your laugh makes me loose focus
because then all I can see is your lips move
imagining they were against mine
knowing there not
and never will be
*Hate when I cant finish a poem and make it powerful trying to get out my thoughts eh*
instead of bad
sweet
instead of sour
your smile makes me fly
without wings
and your laugh
your laugh makes me loose focus
because then all I can see is your lips move
imagining they were against mine
knowing there not
and never will be
*Hate when I cant finish a poem and make it powerful trying to get out my thoughts eh*
Published 3rd Jul 2013
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3rd Jul 2013 5:55am
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3rd Jul 2013 6:07am
3rd Jul 2013 7:09am
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2013 4:19pm
Not powerful?????? You are so wrong! This is a brilliant write! Oh yes come my way for sure. Would love to write with you! :)
26th Aug 2013 10:43pm
I love when I fell as though I can relate. Like, I totally feel like I've been there before :)
11th Oct 2013 4:09am
love this its as if they make everything better if thing were good they make them great felt like this long ago
You have a beautiful style of writing
You have a beautiful style of writing
12th Oct 2013 2:59am
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