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Gamecock (Ol' Man Jess)
Gamecock (Ol' Man Jess)
~ Lessons from the Gullah Isles ~
The ol' cock is up and crowing at the sun
His wattle sways in anticipation as his head bobs about to survey the day
He can see his likeness in the fresh done sheets as he crosses the yard
Hoping he's not stirred the chicks
Chaos of his making when they're underfoot
The dew is moist as he seeks solace in the warmth of the henhouse on this crisp mornin'
He pecks at the door
Head bobbing about
And he's in
Mornin' honey
Presented in the euphemism and double entendre challenge hosted by marthard
~ Lessons from the Gullah Isles ~
The ol' cock is up and crowing at the sun
His wattle sways in anticipation as his head bobs about to survey the day
He can see his likeness in the fresh done sheets as he crosses the yard
Hoping he's not stirred the chicks
Chaos of his making when they're underfoot
The dew is moist as he seeks solace in the warmth of the henhouse on this crisp mornin'
He pecks at the door
Head bobbing about
And he's in
Mornin' honey
Presented in the euphemism and double entendre challenge hosted by marthard
Published 2nd Jul 2013
| Edited 16th Jul 2013
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3rd Jul 2013 1:10am
3rd Jul 2013 2:07am
3rd Jul 2013 6:57am
Love it! That last stanza was wonderful!
I really enjoyed this sexy fun ink! Xoxo
I really enjoyed this sexy fun ink! Xoxo
3rd Jul 2013 7:15am
Thanks Rain ... This was a fun reflective piece thinking about the roosters who'd strut and preen around my grandmother's place in South Carolina, home of the Gamecock. xoxo
LSP
LSP
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2013 9:44pm
LobodeSanPedro,
Ah, I see things are stirred up around your henhouse in the mornings! LOL!!! Nice euphemism and double entendre and good luck!
tornado
Ah, I see things are stirred up around your henhouse in the mornings! LOL!!! Nice euphemism and double entendre and good luck!
tornado
4th Jul 2013 7:49am
In as much as anything this was inspired by those lovely mornings and evenings on my grandmother's place on the coastal islands ... I literally learned the birds n the bees from birds n the bees ...
LSP
LSP
Anonymous
4th Jul 2013 7:25am
Hahahahaha!!!!
Thanks so much for the laugh! Good luck to you.
Thanks so much for the laugh! Good luck to you.
4th Jul 2013 7:53am
I didn't fare well in the competition - but if you laughed AISH - then it was well worth the write ...
... LSP
... LSP
Anonymous
4th Jul 2013 8:11am
I laughed both times I read it. :)
If you haven't noticed some very crappy pieces of writing often win. Don't take it as a reflection on the level of your skill.
If you haven't noticed some very crappy pieces of writing often win. Don't take it as a reflection on the level of your skill.
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