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Dancing naked
wrapped around each other
skin touching skin
bodies sway to the music
heat builds within
fingertips caress slowly
lips touch and taste
bodies sway to the music
teasing without haste
sinful seductions
slow tantalizing lure
bodies sway to the music
carnal arousal for sure
dancing naked titillates
sets the mood for desire
bodies sway to the music
set libidos on fire
the mood now set
we both know the score
bodies sway to the music
as we head for the bedroom door
skin touching skin
bodies sway to the music
heat builds within
fingertips caress slowly
lips touch and taste
bodies sway to the music
teasing without haste
sinful seductions
slow tantalizing lure
bodies sway to the music
carnal arousal for sure
dancing naked titillates
sets the mood for desire
bodies sway to the music
set libidos on fire
the mood now set
we both know the score
bodies sway to the music
as we head for the bedroom door
Published 2nd Jul 2013
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2nd Jul 2013 3:48am
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2nd Jul 2013 5:18am
Bodies dancing naked to the music as we teased in haste, and sway sinfully, seducing our skin with music. About sums up this devilish hot ink, Deb!Xo
I feel like dancing naked right now.....
I feel like dancing naked right now.....
2nd Jul 2013 5:38pm
2nd Jul 2013 2:22pm
yea a dance together in nudity is what everyone should do lol love the sensual promise 'something' more in this :)
2nd Jul 2013 5:39pm
yes everyone should
thank you for reading and commenting
appreciate you
thank you for reading and commenting
appreciate you
2nd Jul 2013 6:23pm
the best way to start the heat up
"bodies swaying to the music"
freakin love it...
"bodies swaying to the music"
freakin love it...
2nd Jul 2013 7:07pm
very pleased you enjoyed
thank you so much for reading
and for commenting
thank you so much for reading
and for commenting
2nd Jul 2013 8:23pm
2nd Jul 2013 8:28pm
Even the Bible has a precedent - King David danced naked (so many understand what was described in 2 Samuel 6 verses 14-22) before the Ark of God after moving it to Jerusalem. (Granted, this was worship not foreplay LOL.)
Having re-read this after a long time, I offer this rhyming comment:
Conveys the couple's ease in their own skin
That allows lovemaking to begin....
2nd Jul 2013 11:35pm
3rd Jul 2013 00:55am
3rd Jul 2013 10:07am
We never ever make it to the bedroom....
Thank you for sharing this familiar scene. Your writing is amazing and I enjoy reading.
Thank you for sharing this familiar scene. Your writing is amazing and I enjoy reading.
3rd Jul 2013 6:22pm
we don't usually make it all the way to the bedroom either...but, if at first you don't succeed, try, try again....and again, and again lol
thank you so much for your great comments
thank you so much for your great comments
26th May 2016 6:25am
This has inspired a poem that came to mind this morning on the theme, which I will post in this section acknowledging your influence.
