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In the Dark
A little boy
in the dark
laying in bed
wide awake
filled with fear
that closed doors
just can't stop.
Sounds fill the air
pain and terror
hurt and hate,
then the silence
a little whimper
a little weep
soft cries for help.
Filled with fear
open the door
into the dark
there,on the floor
mama...what can I do?
in the dark
laying in bed
wide awake
filled with fear
that closed doors
just can't stop.
Sounds fill the air
pain and terror
hurt and hate,
then the silence
a little whimper
a little weep
soft cries for help.
Filled with fear
open the door
into the dark
there,on the floor
mama...what can I do?
Published 30th Jun 2013
| Edited 7th Nov 2016
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Anonymous
30th Jun 2013 2:10pm
Evokes and conveys the pain and tragedy.
30th Jun 2013 4:14pm
30th Jun 2013 2:23pm
Damn, this hit like a hammer...
A true to life scenerio that happens all too often
Excellent n expressive ink my friend
A true to life scenerio that happens all too often
Excellent n expressive ink my friend
30th Jun 2013 4:15pm
30th Jun 2013 5:19pm
wow...this perfectly describes one of my nights with my own mom...I'm near tears right now...fuckin amazing...
30th Jun 2013 8:42pm
30th Jun 2013 5:21pm
30th Jun 2013 8:44pm
Anonymous
30th Jun 2013 7:35pm
You captured the youth and helplessness well. Powerful and expressive, love.
30th Jun 2013 8:47pm
1st Jul 2013 12:56pm
Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 5:31pm
Powerful..heart wrenching read..x
3rd Jul 2013 1:00am
3rd Jul 2013 1:01am
Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 00:15am
I enjoyed reading this!
Very powerful.
Very powerful.
6th Jul 2013 1:59am
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
7th Jul 2013 11:26am
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7th Jul 2013 12:15pm
9th Jul 2013 2:47am
fantastic poem.
it really conveys a sense of fear and pain, unfortunately, I know the feeling all too well
it really conveys a sense of fear and pain, unfortunately, I know the feeling all too well
9th Jul 2013 9:14am
