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But...you changed
I wanted a gentle sweet warm woman
Grown and mature
A mentally adventurous sexaholic who loves videogames
And the lay low life
A care taker and a lover who stays drama free
Knowing how to smile in a frownful place
As creative as the world around her like the poetry
she writes
Dreaming of reaching the top
And possesing endless moments of compassion
But...
You've changed from that completely
And I never want to see you again
Grown and mature
A mentally adventurous sexaholic who loves videogames
And the lay low life
A care taker and a lover who stays drama free
Knowing how to smile in a frownful place
As creative as the world around her like the poetry
she writes
Dreaming of reaching the top
And possesing endless moments of compassion
But...
You've changed from that completely
And I never want to see you again
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Re: But...you changed
29th Jun 2013 8:26pm
Re: But...you changed
29th Jun 2013 8:38pm
Re: But...you changed
Anonymous
29th Jun 2013 8:47pm
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Re: But...you changed
29th Jun 2013 9:17pm
Lol no Amanecio! I'm just firm...it's never good to change negitively for someone else...just a tad angry I guess :-)
Re: But...you changed
Anonymous
30th Jun 2013 00:24am
sux when people change..well expressed..ending packs a punch x
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Re: But...you changed
30th Jun 2013 00:26am
Re: But...you changed
30th Jun 2013 4:26am
yeah, like damn...
that leads you and ends you in the perfect place
great write
=].
that leads you and ends you in the perfect place
great write
=].
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Re: But...you changed
30th Jun 2013 4:29am
Re: But...you changed
30th Jun 2013 9:24am
Damn man, change sucks. Ex specially from something great and something you loved.
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Re: But...you changed
30th Jun 2013 5:10pm
Re: But...you changed
1st Jul 2013 5:19am
Damn...loved the unexpected ending!
From this poem it only reiterates to me the masks that some people tend to wear in the beginning of a relationship, then they start to get comfortable and their inner sorry ass comes out...SURPRISE!
So sad...but SO TRUE! Hence, if it appears too good to be true, it is most likely because it is TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE!
Love it!
From this poem it only reiterates to me the masks that some people tend to wear in the beginning of a relationship, then they start to get comfortable and their inner sorry ass comes out...SURPRISE!
So sad...but SO TRUE! Hence, if it appears too good to be true, it is most likely because it is TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE!
Love it!
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Re: But...you changed
1st Jul 2013 6:40am