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After It Pours~
I love the way the clouds
change right before it rains,
the smell outside after
it pours, the cool
breeze on my sticky
skin, the sun making an
appearance again, the
wind catching the tree's
just right so it looks like
they are dancing, raindrops
fall to the moist soil, when the
sun hits them they look
like shiny jewels, whistling
birds call to one another, then
the sun hides behind a
puff of grey, quickly the cloud
passes and I'm sunkissed
once again.
change right before it rains,
the smell outside after
it pours, the cool
breeze on my sticky
skin, the sun making an
appearance again, the
wind catching the tree's
just right so it looks like
they are dancing, raindrops
fall to the moist soil, when the
sun hits them they look
like shiny jewels, whistling
birds call to one another, then
the sun hides behind a
puff of grey, quickly the cloud
passes and I'm sunkissed
once again.
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25th Jun 2013 6:23pm
aaaawwwww so pretty ur imagery, n beautiful your thoughts spilled in ink form... :)
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Anonymous
25th Jun 2013 6:39pm
tommie,
What a beautifu vision. Keep on dancing in the rain! ; )
tornado
What a beautifu vision. Keep on dancing in the rain! ; )
tornado
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Anonymous
25th Jun 2013 7:35pm
a nice little ditty tl...strider
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25th Jun 2013 7:41pm
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Anonymous
25th Jun 2013 8:10pm
I am in love with every element of this piece. My favorite smell of all...strike that...one of my favorite smells of all is soil and pavement right after it rains. This is going on my reading list for when I need stress relief.
Throw in one of those low bass wind chimes and I've gone to heaven ;)
Throw in one of those low bass wind chimes and I've gone to heaven ;)
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25th Jun 2013 8:19pm
Thank you lerdgoin....Love a good storm...I think we're in for another one today!
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Anonymous
25th Jun 2013 11:07pm
Lucky you! We're just having a heat storm all week
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25th Jun 2013 8:18pm
Can relate, in our English climate, to the post-rain smells. Our June weather seems changeable at the moment.
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25th Jun 2013 8:30pm
It's been so hot and dry here..we need some rain!I could see the steam rising up from the road while the rain was hitting it!
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Anonymous
25th Jun 2013 9:38pm
This was the perfect poem for a day like this
Good read
Thanks
Kitty
Good read
Thanks
Kitty
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2013 2:59am
I love your description of the dancing trees :) My neighbor has really tall bamboo in his and and when the wind blows it does a fascinating modern dance. Wind in the trees is an awesomely peaceful sound!
Thanks for the peaceful reverie!;)
Thanks for the peaceful reverie!;)
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26th Jun 2013 3:35am
Very true osobeto...very peaceful! Thanks for reading and your great comment ;)