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My Reminders ...
Fairy tale dates and brushes with "magic moments"
Has never been our calling.
Impromptu changes in plans, diverted desires,
Even stalled goals...
This is more in line with our plight...
Simplistic love...
“Anything worth it...is worth fighting for!”
Even when marred by
Atrocious moments of betrayal...
to be forgiven with asterisk marks in place.
Humbled Love…
So there are no bow outs or see you laters.
Instead in this place are years of
brick by brick
acknowledgement of works,
failures,
good, bad, and ugly times...
Steady Love…
Ultimately erecting
the image of us...
Agape Love.
Has never been our calling.
Impromptu changes in plans, diverted desires,
Even stalled goals...
This is more in line with our plight...
Simplistic love...
“Anything worth it...is worth fighting for!”
Even when marred by
Atrocious moments of betrayal...
to be forgiven with asterisk marks in place.
Humbled Love…
So there are no bow outs or see you laters.
Instead in this place are years of
brick by brick
acknowledgement of works,
failures,
good, bad, and ugly times...
Steady Love…
Ultimately erecting
the image of us...
Agape Love.
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Re: My Reminders ...
25th Jun 2013 7:25pm
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25th Jun 2013 10:46pm
Glad to hear you had a moment to connect to something a bit different. Appeciate the read and comments!!
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25th Jun 2013 7:49pm
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26th Jun 2013 3:01am
Love.....love.....love...!
This one is Fantastic, nikn!
Beautiful flow....xo
This one is Fantastic, nikn!
Beautiful flow....xo
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re: Re: My Reminders ...
26th Jun 2013 3:30pm
Thanks Rain...indirectly your Someone Else poem started the kindling on this one! :)
Re: My Reminders ...
26th Jun 2013 2:03pm
A song repeats over and over in my head; "Have you noticed that an angry man
Can only get so far
Until he reconciles the way he thinks things ought to be
With the way things are"
A truly precious write!
Can only get so far
Until he reconciles the way he thinks things ought to be
With the way things are"
A truly precious write!
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26th Jun 2013 3:31pm
Haven't heard that one..who's it by?? Reconciling can be a hard process!! Appreiciate the read!
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17th Sep 2013 8:39pm
awwwww. I feel so touched and how your someone special feels it too!!! Thanks for the following!