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Just a Thought
I said to myself
I was going to write
My name up in the skies
That when men wake up
And look up
They will see me
Placed clearly, boldly.
I thought it was
Just a thought.
I was going to write
My name up in the skies
That when men wake up
And look up
They will see me
Placed clearly, boldly.
I thought it was
Just a thought.
Published 22nd Nov 2010
| Edited 8th Dec 2010
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23rd Nov 2010 00:58am
I really like your style. I feel like (though I have know idea what you sound like) I can here your voice speaking each word. Some how each seems like a little piece of you and with each read we get a bigger picture of you. Just some thoughts of my own.
Thank you for sharing.
Love&Peace
Thank you for sharing.
Love&Peace
23rd Nov 2010 8:25am
Thank you, beautiful Shannon Lee, for your fine comment on the poem and about me. You are very correct.
I am beginning to discover that poets share thoughts. Because, I have read poems in this site that resemble my own unpublished thoughts(poems).
I am falling afresh in love with you guys everyday.
7th Dec 2010 8:58am
Every poem I read that spilled from your pen makes me think,even some bring tears. You have a beautiful stile.
Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for sharing.
7th Dec 2010 9:31am
