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Slippery knot
On my belly I’m spread
entangled in crisp sheets
eyes closed to just sense
my expectant body tremble
smooth skin prickle
breathlessly
longing for a touch.
Hot lips barely brush
promising tongue
refuses to calm
what has been unleashed.
Sweet sensations
spread between thighs
as droplets of oil
sprinkle the back where
fingers and palms expertly
meet calendula scent.
I arch into your hands
stretch under your weight
moan into damp sheets
want and need
you inside my craving sheath
sweaty and wet, oily and hot
we fuse and tie
a slippery knot.
entangled in crisp sheets
eyes closed to just sense
my expectant body tremble
smooth skin prickle
breathlessly
longing for a touch.
Hot lips barely brush
promising tongue
refuses to calm
what has been unleashed.
Sweet sensations
spread between thighs
as droplets of oil
sprinkle the back where
fingers and palms expertly
meet calendula scent.
I arch into your hands
stretch under your weight
moan into damp sheets
want and need
you inside my craving sheath
sweaty and wet, oily and hot
we fuse and tie
a slippery knot.
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Re: Slippery knot
Anonymous
24th Jun 2013 10:19pm
Chiyo,
May your slippery knot never come untied! What a super HOT write that builds to a very stisfying climax ; )
tornado
May your slippery knot never come untied! What a super HOT write that builds to a very stisfying climax ; )
tornado
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re: Re: Slippery knot
25th Jun 2013 7:42am
Thanks a lot, tornado! We'll hopefully manage to occasionally loosen the knot a little!
Chi
Chi
Re: Slippery knot
Anonymous
25th Jun 2013 9:27pm
Very sensual & captivating write, Iris. Wonderful expression & flow to this piece. Great poem & great & hot read! :)
*Peace & Love* Carlene
*Peace & Love* Carlene
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re: Re: Slippery knot
28th Jun 2013 9:29am
Glad about your wonderful comment, Carlene! Much appreciated, as always, my friend!
I.
I.
Re: Slippery knot
30th Jun 2013 3:20pm
Mmmmmm this was delicious to feed, oops I mean read! lol
Very sensually hot imagery in this! :)
Very sensually hot imagery in this! :)
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re: Re: Slippery knot
30th Jun 2013 5:56pm
Glad to have been able to stimulate your appetite :-). Thanks for your tasty comment, Poetikmind!
Chi
Chi
Re: Slippery knot
Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 9:34am
Caution: slippery when wet.
Sexy ink Chi.
Sexy ink Chi.
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1st Jul 2013 9:46pm
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16th Jan 2014 4:41am
I believe you excited all of my senses with this ink Ms Chi. Smoothly erotic. A lovely mix. A fan of your work as always Ms Chi. Lovely.
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re: Re: Slippery knot
16th Jan 2014 7:01pm
I'm very glad to have your senses churned up :-). Thank you for your lovely and very welcome comment, Twitch!
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16th Jan 2014 7:08pm
I arch into your hands
stretch under your weight
moan into damp sheets
want and need
you inside my craving sheath
sweaty and wet, oily and hot
we fuse and tie
a slippery knot.
very pragmatic view
before anyone to
find the clue
stretch under your weight
moan into damp sheets
want and need
you inside my craving sheath
sweaty and wet, oily and hot
we fuse and tie
a slippery knot.
very pragmatic view
before anyone to
find the clue
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re: Re: Slippery knot
16th Jan 2014 8:45pm
Would like to thank you
for your comment
or answer something
of value but
that's over my head.
Please rephrase it!
before anyone to
find the clue
for your comment
or answer something
of value but
that's over my head.
Please rephrase it!
before anyone to
find the clue
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16th Jan 2014 9:24pm
very pragmatic view
before anyone to
find the clue
means
achievement of the purpose
as you pose
and post it
before anyone to
find the clue
means
achievement of the purpose
as you pose
and post it
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17th Jan 2014 1:31pm
Ah, okay, thank you. Sometimes I do have difficulties if it gets too "English" :-).
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17th Jan 2014 5:14pm
Sexy language probs
You will have to go Bling
to translate
English into Spanish and German
but all have the same kind
of inner
long, thick or thin
and, tight slim or big
pussy of missy
hammers men steady
you know it
man and women
and
the two do
As you all do
have you a clue
what others do
and
well then
how do you do
You will have to go Bling
to translate
English into Spanish and German
but all have the same kind
of inner
long, thick or thin
and, tight slim or big
pussy of missy
hammers men steady
you know it
man and women
and
the two do
As you all do
have you a clue
what others do
and
well then
how do you do
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