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well, i entered the poem.  it was supposed to be a blank-page poem, one that, hypothetically speaking, could use the reader's thoughts as the words.  I guess though that that would've failed because the reader might've been wondering "why is this poem blank," and that would've been the most significant thought associated with this poem, anyway.  ah, well.  experiment failed due to fatal flaw.

ah, well, well, well.
Written by patrickbirdener (Patrick Birdener)
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