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Re: IN VAIN
23rd Jun 2013 3:53pm
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23rd Jun 2013 8:09pm
Re: IN VAIN
23rd Jun 2013 6:52pm
Intriguing...Sad....Lovely. This piece presents such an unexpected concept of how the Moon Goddess is usually presented.
Somehow,at least for me, she is invariably portrayed as the ruler of her night world...but, your poem definitely puts a creative,symbolic, more sinister spin on this entire idea.
("...Before being overtaken/merciless/by the Masters of Tonight")--Chilling!!
Your amazing imagery...both visual, and written, are what makes this outstanding.
Thank you for sharing your gift(s) with us!
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
Somehow,at least for me, she is invariably portrayed as the ruler of her night world...but, your poem definitely puts a creative,symbolic, more sinister spin on this entire idea.
("...Before being overtaken/merciless/by the Masters of Tonight")--Chilling!!
Your amazing imagery...both visual, and written, are what makes this outstanding.
Thank you for sharing your gift(s) with us!
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
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re: Re: IN VAIN
23rd Jun 2013 8:13pm
Hi Enchantress,
welcome to my world of writing and imagery. And thank you for your response. Wow... what a wonderful words. I expected way much more people here to combine word and imagery... is that the case?
Isn't it nice to have the ruler of the night submit on occasion for the swift ghosts of the wind?
Greetings and respect,
Ink
welcome to my world of writing and imagery. And thank you for your response. Wow... what a wonderful words. I expected way much more people here to combine word and imagery... is that the case?
Isn't it nice to have the ruler of the night submit on occasion for the swift ghosts of the wind?
Greetings and respect,
Ink
Re: IN VAIN
23rd Jun 2013 9:06pm
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24th Jun 2013 6:14pm
How nice. Thank you! So fun being here with such lovely persons responding
Re: IN VAIN
24th Jun 2013 6:26am
re: Re: IN VAIN
24th Jun 2013 6:15pm
Thank you! I just love the way the clouds flow like waves towards the moon. I was lucky to capture this
Re: IN VAIN
Anonymous
24th Jun 2013 6:01pm
Your visual and ink collide beautifully. :)
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re: Re: IN VAIN
24th Jun 2013 6:16pm