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Last Nail in the Coffin !!!
My facade hides the true soul
Its the deep devil who empowers the control
Invisible reflections in the life's mirror
No one sees my burning flames in terror.
Slowly drowning in the blood soaked tears
Lost in the maze of spur and spears
Scary dreams, Piercing screams
Encapsulating into the dark screens.
The neverending blackness in my vicinity
Has handicapped badly with the insecurity
Being the victim of pure damnation
Wracked with splinters my dead emotion.
Betrayal, cheating all came my way
Tired of fakeness, finally Heart had to say :
"Alone, cold and burned out of stalking
Please for god's sake, now put this last nail in my coffin."
Its the deep devil who empowers the control
Invisible reflections in the life's mirror
No one sees my burning flames in terror.
Slowly drowning in the blood soaked tears
Lost in the maze of spur and spears
Scary dreams, Piercing screams
Encapsulating into the dark screens.
The neverending blackness in my vicinity
Has handicapped badly with the insecurity
Being the victim of pure damnation
Wracked with splinters my dead emotion.
Betrayal, cheating all came my way
Tired of fakeness, finally Heart had to say :
"Alone, cold and burned out of stalking
Please for god's sake, now put this last nail in my coffin."
Published 21st Jun 2013
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21st Jun 2013 9:15pm
A dark, melancholy, desolate yet beautifully written write, Brinda! Xo
"Slowly drowning in the blood soaked tears
Lost in the maze of spur and spears
Scary dreams, Piercing screams
Encapsulating into the dark screens"<---LOVED!
"Slowly drowning in the blood soaked tears
Lost in the maze of spur and spears
Scary dreams, Piercing screams
Encapsulating into the dark screens"<---LOVED!
22nd Jun 2013 5:43am
22nd Jun 2013 2:16am
It is very well written- throughout!!
Loved the dark piece, very thoughtfully penned indeed
Loved the dark piece, very thoughtfully penned indeed
22nd Jun 2013 5:43am
22nd Jun 2013 5:46am
22nd Jun 2013 5:49am
Just going through a bad phase with less hopes.
But it shall pass.:)
Happy that you loved this piece :)
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