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(i had writers block and this is the thing i came out with lol)
don't you sometimes wish for an easy life?
well truth is...for us it's not possible.
while we work to get what we want,
the snobs of easy get it given to them.
last hopes and lost dreams...
broken and conjoined into dribble.
a mess of simpleton construction,
devour fresh born ingeniousness....
they cause wars we cause pain,
to them it's all a game of chess.
one day they will notice us...
one day we will shout for freedom!
do you know what life is like?
are you living in the real world?
if the answer is yes
then you know how we feel right?
if the answer is no
then i've reserved your place in hell.
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don't you sometimes wish for an easy life?
well truth is...for us it's not possible.
while we work to get what we want,
the snobs of easy get it given to them.
last hopes and lost dreams...
broken and conjoined into dribble.
a mess of simpleton construction,
devour fresh born ingeniousness....
they cause wars we cause pain,
to them it's all a game of chess.
one day they will notice us...
one day we will shout for freedom!
do you know what life is like?
are you living in the real world?
if the answer is yes
then you know how we feel right?
if the answer is no
then i've reserved your place in hell.
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Published 17th Nov 2010
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17th Nov 2010 8:29pm
even though you had writers block, you still managed to pull off another great poem sarah :)
i simply adore the whole poem but the stanza's of 2,3,4 and 9 shout at me more. keep writing saraaaaahhhh xxx
i simply adore the whole poem but the stanza's of 2,3,4 and 9 shout at me more. keep writing saraaaaahhhh xxx
18th Nov 2010 8:17am
hahahah thank you :)
and yes i still cant believe that with writers block i managed to write down this XDD
epic win i say.
oh yeah sis, you just lost the game :P x
5th Jan 2011 2:34am
5th Jan 2011 8:12pm
