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Point of View of a Loner
I'm in a sea of people
People I see every day
Every week
Yet I do not know them
And they do not know me
This day is cold
And alone
I feel the hypothermia setting in
The cold sea of people chills my skin
I try to cling to life,
But am only pushed away
I decide to hide but there is no place to hide in an ocean.
Quietly, silently, and with out notice I disappear into the cold dark abyss
I am invisible, gone
I am unseen in a sea of people.
The end.
People I see every day
Every week
Yet I do not know them
And they do not know me
This day is cold
And alone
I feel the hypothermia setting in
The cold sea of people chills my skin
I try to cling to life,
But am only pushed away
I decide to hide but there is no place to hide in an ocean.
Quietly, silently, and with out notice I disappear into the cold dark abyss
I am invisible, gone
I am unseen in a sea of people.
The end.
Published 17th Jun 2013
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- Edited 17th Jun 2013 8:43pm
17th Jun 2013 8:42pm
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20th Jun 2013 1:52am
20th Jun 2013 2:11am
A very moving n sad write, many people feel
the reality of loneliness in a crowd... Very well captured here :)
the reality of loneliness in a crowd... Very well captured here :)
