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what are you?
if you're a puppet
I have miraculous penmenship
and good steady hands that have carved an angel
out of air
if youre a dream
I pray you grant me eternal sleep
if you're my Ggoddess
the Ggoddess
the void
I pray you swallow me into your indentation
and turn off all the lights
(in the vacuum)
(let us lay)
(let us fuck)
(let us leave)
I have miraculous penmenship
and good steady hands that have carved an angel
out of air
if youre a dream
I pray you grant me eternal sleep
if you're my Ggoddess
the Ggoddess
the void
I pray you swallow me into your indentation
and turn off all the lights
(in the vacuum)
(let us lay)
(let us fuck)
(let us leave)
Published 14th Nov 2010
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2010 7:47pm
Another fine romantic piece, more genuine than most entries in this genre. The penultimate verse was my favourite.
14th Nov 2010 8:23pm
the original note ended at turn of all the lights.. but it didnt seem conclusive enough so i wrangled up an ending thats worthy.. at least i think :)
