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Once more....
Never been much of a believer a hopeless romantic until our paths crossed and I finally seen her
And when we first met who would have known the feelings i had were to grow to an unmatched extent nothing short of heaven sent
Its only been about a week and I'm already missing that unforgettable scent plenty have came and went but this is far more than just a casual encounter with an intent to pillage and plunder the goods to leave you without any means of attack on your back don't get this misunderstood I ramble on like its gonna do me some good probably why love continually cages me like a trapped bird well lets try this once more because I simply don't know any better and who better than you to show you that there more to love than what you thought you once knew......
And when we first met who would have known the feelings i had were to grow to an unmatched extent nothing short of heaven sent
Its only been about a week and I'm already missing that unforgettable scent plenty have came and went but this is far more than just a casual encounter with an intent to pillage and plunder the goods to leave you without any means of attack on your back don't get this misunderstood I ramble on like its gonna do me some good probably why love continually cages me like a trapped bird well lets try this once more because I simply don't know any better and who better than you to show you that there more to love than what you thought you once knew......
Published 11th Jun 2013
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11th Jun 2013 2:53am
I enjoyed this, for some reason I felt like raping it. :)
What I would change is the format, its a little hard to read, maybe space it out into paragraphs?
What I would change is the format, its a little hard to read, maybe space it out into paragraphs?
