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Scars
Lover, let me taste your scars
Run my tongue along them like a salve to their healing.
Having no anguish;a perfected man,I must live yours
Feel you heal as the loss leaves you less
Watch you struggle to mend and revive your soul
Where others discarded your flesh as debris in the wind
And as you sit there exposed and raw from it
I lie in wait,
Eager to sooth the past in carnal feasts
For my own desires; and yours
Intent on savoring in your pain
Run my tongue along them like a salve to their healing.
Having no anguish;a perfected man,I must live yours
Feel you heal as the loss leaves you less
Watch you struggle to mend and revive your soul
Where others discarded your flesh as debris in the wind
And as you sit there exposed and raw from it
I lie in wait,
Eager to sooth the past in carnal feasts
For my own desires; and yours
Intent on savoring in your pain
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Re: Scars
7th Jun 2013 4:31pm
Okay, my new favorite!
"Eager to sooth the past in carnal feasts"
very good line!
You delivered a deep but sensuous poem hawkdude!
"Eager to sooth the past in carnal feasts"
very good line!
You delivered a deep but sensuous poem hawkdude!
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Anonymous
7th Jun 2013 4:52pm
A brilliant write, one of the best to be posted under "love poems".
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 1:46am
Must. Read. More. of your poems. You reach deep, m'sieur.
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 9:46pm
Whew! Hot love poem indeed. Mmmmm! :)
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25th Jun 2013 1:33am
Well I'm flattered miss. But I don't believe that I know the first thing about that. Thank you.
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Anonymous
30th Jul 2013 4:14am
Very sensual poem of caring lust. Enjoyed! :)
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