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Can't Have What You Want
You want what you can't have
feeding into your greedy and
selfish ways
Playing make believe with
one another you aren't
really there
Fabricating your lives to get
pity from a stranger you think
you connected with
It's fulfilling the empty space
but it can never be as you wish
for it to be
Somethings never change
you hoped they would but
you can't lie to a liar
Take your heads out of the clouds
and step into reality it's time to
move on
feeding into your greedy and
selfish ways
Playing make believe with
one another you aren't
really there
Fabricating your lives to get
pity from a stranger you think
you connected with
It's fulfilling the empty space
but it can never be as you wish
for it to be
Somethings never change
you hoped they would but
you can't lie to a liar
Take your heads out of the clouds
and step into reality it's time to
move on
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Re: Can't Have What You Want
Anonymous
6th Jun 2013 8:32pm
Are you twalking ta me! An excellent message piece!
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Anonymous
6th Jun 2013 11:23pm
Pheeeeeewwww! "cause you really rocked my fantasy world ;) I really thought I'd have to wake up and smell the reality roasted coffee
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Re: Can't Have What You Want
6th Jun 2013 8:34pm
Wow, this is a pretty blunt message
why not just shoot them in the head n put em outta misery?? lol... Strong ink my dear friend :)
why not just shoot them in the head n put em outta misery?? lol... Strong ink my dear friend :)
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re: Re: Can't Have What You Want
6th Jun 2013 9:42pm
Some people live in a fantasy world...I think reality as shitty as it is sometimes is much better!
Thank you Poetikmind
Thank you Poetikmind
Re: Can't Have What You Want
6th Jun 2013 8:55pm
Somethings never change
you hoped they would but
you can't lie to a liar
you sure can't!!
good job
you hoped they would but
you can't lie to a liar
you sure can't!!
good job
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