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Tears
he wiped the tears from my eyes
with the pads of his finger tips
useless as the tears were replaced
with streams down my cheeks
his pain was evident
as I looked into his eyes
that were quickly filled
his tears clouding the blueness
I long to stare into
I love him and I told him
he didn’t say it back, but I know
he showed his love in the way he kissed me
and the gentle way he touched me
making love so tenderly
letting his body speak the words for him
he will not be back
not until he is free to claim me as his own
not until she releases him
not until he is back in my arms
will the tears stop their flow
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Re: Tears
6th Jun 2013 2:41pm
Hhhhhmmmm too familiar with this scenerio!
gut wrenching emptiness when the one you want isn't with you...excellent emotive release
gut wrenching emptiness when the one you want isn't with you...excellent emotive release
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Anonymous
6th Jun 2013 3:03pm
I feel you here. Written with beautifully with bursting emotion. :)
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Anonymous
6th Jun 2013 3:10pm
so sad..but beautifully written-heartfelt, nice work :-)
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6th Jun 2013 3:34pm
Perceptive to hear the love in his actions, and more true than just the words, miss luna.
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6th Jun 2013 7:12pm
An honorable man to not say the words he can't say until he is free to do so. but to let you know that they are there waiting to be said.
Beautiful beautiful poem.
Beautiful beautiful poem.
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23rd Dec 2014 6:28am
he will not be back
not until he is free to claim me as his own
not until she releases him
not until he is back in my arms
will the tears stop their flow ...
Yes that's what I was looking for.
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