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Breathe deep the humid air
The air,humid sweet
hawthorn blossom,
bitter-sweet of May
beside the waiting elders
drowsing bluebells
limp and silent
in the early breeze.
It was only eight
my love lay sleeping
midst chaotic sheets
humid air,bitter-sweet
rivalling the blossoms
reminding me of her.
I lingered by the bluebells
saw Eglantine's first bloom
virgin flowers open to the sun
as I thought of the rose
that lay sleeping,petals closed
(humid air and bittersweet)
for me to wake . . . . . .
It was only eight no need of rush,
time to leave the pigeons
cooing in the early breeze,
breathe again humid air,
bittersweet and curtains closed.
hawthorn blossom,
bitter-sweet of May
beside the waiting elders
drowsing bluebells
limp and silent
in the early breeze.
It was only eight
my love lay sleeping
midst chaotic sheets
humid air,bitter-sweet
rivalling the blossoms
reminding me of her.
I lingered by the bluebells
saw Eglantine's first bloom
virgin flowers open to the sun
as I thought of the rose
that lay sleeping,petals closed
(humid air and bittersweet)
for me to wake . . . . . .
It was only eight no need of rush,
time to leave the pigeons
cooing in the early breeze,
breathe again humid air,
bittersweet and curtains closed.
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