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.:LOST MEN: Survival of The 'illest:. �

Dear Child, remember this
� � � � From the upper hand springs the beastly man...
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �...the better man if you understand

Know that once I was alone in a desert
� � � This desert was vast and so immense
� � � � � � � � �and I was very lost

Weathered; parched & dry
� � � � Having only a survivor�s frown
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �I�d kill to be found

So then I prayed

When those feelings of being broken came
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � I said to the gods & myself

� � � � � � � � � �I shall not be of those who die a death as if lame
� � � � �So I will dream of being whole
� �Allowing might & faith
to take its toll�

and
then
� � �I swayed

Lost and broken; yet in still
� �ready to kill
Life for me
� � hadn�t found its thrill

And I rocked
� � �back & forth
� � � � � � Then I rocked to & fro
� � � � � � � � � � � � � �
and then�seemingly out of nowhere

a stranger appears
� � � � � � � � � �Map in his hand and
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � me with my tears

Faith�

How it sets things aright

I hit that stranger
� � � � � �with all of my
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � �might

Divine Intervention sending
someone
to kill

My praying
� � � � � & swaying

Mapping sense
� � � � � with each kill
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �

Written by kriticool

Published 4th Jun 2013

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Re: .:LOST MEN: Survival of The 'illest:. �

Anonymous

4th Jun 2013 6:54pm

loved the poem love the format kriticool...strider

kriticool

4th Jun 2013 7:17pm

ha

strider...man
i'm tryin to pen that one or two you absolutely can't stand.
let me know when we're close

good lookin

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Re: .:LOST MEN: Survival of The 'illest:. �

Naajir

4th Jun 2013 7:24pm

Dude!....this is one of the most original pieces I have ever read.. from concept to execution this without a doubt is a straight up masterpiece... and the depth of the message resonate profoundly throughout... powerful presentation indeed