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Orgasm Haiku
Pulsating cervix
Hungry labium sucking in
lineage thread of come.
Spread on a red rug
Are two consummate mortals
Savouring their sin.
Hungry labium sucking in
lineage thread of come.
Spread on a red rug
Are two consummate mortals
Savouring their sin.
Published 8th Nov 2010
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9th Nov 2010 2:52am
I like how it goes from near-gynecological to near-religious. It's a powerful piece, and it unsettled me a little. Good job!
9th Nov 2010 7:51am
