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Play Me My Love
You played my body like a
bow across the strings on a
antique Stradivari with
fingers lightly placed and timed
while your mouth hummed in
perfect harmony creating
pitch perfect tone and
the most beautiful melody
ever heard
You played my heart
serenading me sweetly
as notes danced, lulling
me into sweet surrender
You played my mind
imprinting you there
I can think
of nothing but you
day dreaming as I wafted
on pillows of soft
downy clouds
You played me
musically together
and I have fallen deeply
in love with you
and I want to play forever
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30th May 2013 2:45pm
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30th May 2013 11:09pm
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31st May 2013 2:06am
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Anonymous
30th May 2013 11:38pm
Love this. A sweet toned and loving poem.
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31st May 2013 7:15am
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Anonymous
1st Jun 2013 4:37pm
For fear of ruining my rep as a sadist, I'll keep it brief.
This was a truly heartfelt, simply magical read. Your love and devotion bled so beautifully in ink.
This was a truly heartfelt, simply magical read. Your love and devotion bled so beautifully in ink.
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1st Jun 2013 5:43pm
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3rd Jun 2013 4:16pm
Wow, you really struck the poetic jackpot on this one.
Clever skill used here.
Clever skill used here.
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