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RECOLLECTION
recalling mornings after
early dawn s
sweet light
soft quiet peace
cool cotton sheets
heavenly rumpled clouds
of our
consummated love s
ecstatically released
completion
still lingering
in the air
everywhere
around us
as we savor
in the joyous
slowly waning wonder
of it s tingling
afterglow
as it pulses
like a rapturous river
through our bodies
minds and senses
and at least
for now
our fully sated
freshly fed
yet still ever hungry
longing
human hearts
as well
Published 29th May 2013
| Edited 6th Jul 2024
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Anonymous
29th May 2013 9:17pm
soothing flow oin
30th May 2013 5:58am
thanks Strider...
* (post-synopsis):
First calm thoughts to come into my head, upon opening my eyes & gently waking to early dawn's peaceful play of it's delicate light across & over the contoured, miniature mountain-like landscape of the rumpled sheets & covers of my bed, then looking over & seeing the still sleeping face of the person I was with & instantly being reminded of our god-like interplay's sweet, ecstatic dance the night before, which created this beautiful landscape I had just awoken to & in suddenly realizing the broader interconnection of that wonderful juxtaposition's present outcome, I was filled with an even deeper, inner, after-glow, which enhanced my appreciation & prolonged my savoring of the quiet, peaceful rareness of this remarkable moment I had just awakened to!...
So it was from this spontaneous inspiration, that this minimally worded, little poem arose & seemed in that moment to somehow fully encapsulate (suggestively) the essence of it all, like a polaroid snap-shot, secretly taken, to document & capture the simple wonder of it's memory for me forever...
(there I go again...with too damn much explanation!... I suspect this habit has come from me having watched & enjoyed watching a few too many online interviews, with directors & actors from popular movies, over the years, who go into great detail to convey with sincere passion, their take & interpretation, the deeper meaning, the insights & impressions they have regarding these films they helped create &/or starred in!?!)...
So, just imagine how I must feel right now (after all this), when upon looking down here & seeing your comment to me, which brought about 'all this', & seeing that your entire comment consisted of only 3 words!!!!...
(So, looks like it's back to the ol' drawing board 'AGAIN' for me here now!!!!) lol...
- OIN
* (post-synopsis):
First calm thoughts to come into my head, upon opening my eyes & gently waking to early dawn's peaceful play of it's delicate light across & over the contoured, miniature mountain-like landscape of the rumpled sheets & covers of my bed, then looking over & seeing the still sleeping face of the person I was with & instantly being reminded of our god-like interplay's sweet, ecstatic dance the night before, which created this beautiful landscape I had just awoken to & in suddenly realizing the broader interconnection of that wonderful juxtaposition's present outcome, I was filled with an even deeper, inner, after-glow, which enhanced my appreciation & prolonged my savoring of the quiet, peaceful rareness of this remarkable moment I had just awakened to!...
So it was from this spontaneous inspiration, that this minimally worded, little poem arose & seemed in that moment to somehow fully encapsulate (suggestively) the essence of it all, like a polaroid snap-shot, secretly taken, to document & capture the simple wonder of it's memory for me forever...
(there I go again...with too damn much explanation!... I suspect this habit has come from me having watched & enjoyed watching a few too many online interviews, with directors & actors from popular movies, over the years, who go into great detail to convey with sincere passion, their take & interpretation, the deeper meaning, the insights & impressions they have regarding these films they helped create &/or starred in!?!)...
So, just imagine how I must feel right now (after all this), when upon looking down here & seeing your comment to me, which brought about 'all this', & seeing that your entire comment consisted of only 3 words!!!!...
(So, looks like it's back to the ol' drawing board 'AGAIN' for me here now!!!!) lol...
- OIN
