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Satisfaction
how does one decipher
burning passion that transpires
from heated stares
to bodies bared
hands like claws
rip and tear, there are no laws
mouths in heated rush
deepening every push
till sweat does drip, slowly and thick
sounds of rapture
our passion captured
never to untwine
till words “you are mine”
thrusting and moaning
ecstasy unfolding
peaks of pleasure mound
satisfaction has been found
Published 29th May 2013
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Anonymous
29th May 2013 1:47pm
clever and hot..nice work, Luna
29th May 2013 3:14pm
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29th May 2013 3:39pm
"sounds of rapture
our passion captured"
great lines! a passion that can only be expressed with sound (not even word).
our passion captured"
great lines! a passion that can only be expressed with sound (not even word).
29th May 2013 3:42pm
29th May 2013 4:08pm
Sounds of rapture, captured? Hhhmmmm now why does this sound sooooo familiar? lol very very hott as usual my dear you have awakened my hunger lol excellent!
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Anonymous
29th May 2013 8:21pm
Very sensual write (he says as he stares at her heatedly) :)
29th May 2013 11:36pm
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2nd Jul 2013 4:12pm
I love the transition (from heated stares to body bares)....speaks of raw lust of pleasure. Good write.
25th Nov 2013 8:59am
I love this I want to memorize it and recite it to my wife at night it is sexy catchy I love ur passionate writing.
