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sensational
my soul cries
(i really don't know why)
so ignore my tears and pretend
that we are lovers lost in passion
i'll think of you tomorrow
when i'm soaking my stockings
and nothing seems sensational
but the mole on my left cheek
(i really don't know why)
so ignore my tears and pretend
that we are lovers lost in passion
i'll think of you tomorrow
when i'm soaking my stockings
and nothing seems sensational
but the mole on my left cheek
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Re: sensational
28th May 2013 8:16pm
This is rather sensational write my dear
great write from your magic pen
Marcus
great write from your magic pen
Marcus
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28th May 2013 8:21pm
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Anonymous
28th May 2013 8:25pm
I love it! From the passionate to the mundane. Clever comparisons shown in few words. Excellent craft, Faith. Well done, my friend! :) xo
Carlene
Carlene
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29th May 2013 9:36am
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28th May 2013 8:28pm
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29th May 2013 9:36am
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Anonymous
28th May 2013 10:37pm
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29th May 2013 9:37am
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29th May 2013 9:38am
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Anonymous
29th May 2013 00:32am
Have Mercy!! That's all I can think of to say. LOL!!!! :)
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re: Re: sensational
29th May 2013 9:39am
Thanks for commenting, my friend. Always nice to see you have stopped by! xo
Faith
Faith
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29th May 2013 3:12am
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