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don't follow me I'm lost too....
I go where my mind takes me
with no aim
no map
and no idea what the fuck I'm doing
but I'm not stopping
and have no idea what will come next
or where i'll end up
a few people come along for thsi strange ride
it's terrifying but only in the back of my mind
the rest of the time its full throttle nowhere
with no brakes
a nut full of cum
and a head scarred with bits of delusions
left behind from old acid trips
its your own god damn fault
if I end up breaking your neck
I take no responisibility for you, dip shit
with no aim
no map
and no idea what the fuck I'm doing
but I'm not stopping
and have no idea what will come next
or where i'll end up
a few people come along for thsi strange ride
it's terrifying but only in the back of my mind
the rest of the time its full throttle nowhere
with no brakes
a nut full of cum
and a head scarred with bits of delusions
left behind from old acid trips
its your own god damn fault
if I end up breaking your neck
I take no responisibility for you, dip shit
Published 3rd Nov 2010
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8th Aug 2011 9:51pm
not sure of the style buy i dont think i like it too much its your own god damn fault
if I end up breaking your neck does this even fit into the poem?
if I end up breaking your neck does this even fit into the poem?
10th Aug 2011 4:06pm
if you dont like it you dont like it. this is how i write poetry. dont think it fits in "self poems" or? well maybe theres no place for it... just call it free style and throw it in your garbage disposal.. cheers!
