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Moonlight Changes Everyting
fallen light of the crescent moon
faint as you peek quietly
passing through glass in my room
wicked glow you changed the view
turning shades as colors pale
in hues of several porcelain blues
skin formed shadows
of lasting impression
tracing curves from thigh to elbow
when you were mine for hours
reminders of a time at night
ever this…ever thine…ever ours
faint as you peek quietly
passing through glass in my room
wicked glow you changed the view
turning shades as colors pale
in hues of several porcelain blues
skin formed shadows
of lasting impression
tracing curves from thigh to elbow
when you were mine for hours
reminders of a time at night
ever this…ever thine…ever ours
Published 20th May 2013
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20th May 2013 2:58pm
this is sweetly beautiful! although i'm
not sure about ur last line... i actually don't think it's needed... BUT of course that's just an opinion l.o.l.
not sure about ur last line... i actually don't think it's needed... BUT of course that's just an opinion l.o.l.
20th May 2013 3:52pm
20th May 2013 3:34pm
Awesome description of moment in time......for me. Very nice and encompassing!
20th May 2013 3:53pm
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20th May 2013 3:56pm
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
20th May 2013 4:11pm
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- Edited 6th Mar 2019 10:45pm
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