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I love my life
I love my life
I love my life it's full of
dreams,goals and achievements
Yours is filled with
Hate and misery
My life is filled with
Truth and love
Yours is filled with
Lies and selfishness
My life is filled with
Facts and opinions
Your is filled with
Fiction and disagreement
My life is filled with
Effort and hard work
Yours is filled with
No effort and half jobs
I love my life it's full of
dreams,goals and achievements
Yours is filled with
Hate and misery
My life is filled with
Truth and love
Yours is filled with
Lies and selfishness
My life is filled with
Facts and opinions
Your is filled with
Fiction and disagreement
My life is filled with
Effort and hard work
Yours is filled with
No effort and half jobs
Published 19th May 2013
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30th Jun 2013 8:31pm
I like the way each line is compared to the next.
Good thinking here.
Well done.
Good thinking here.
Well done.
16th Feb 2014 4:50am
Very aggressive and full of pain. I find venting as a useful form of expression yet it rarely amounts into good writing... ;( super one sided and juvenile! Keep grindin
