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Daddy's girl
i am Daddy’s girl
i am His submissive
i am His lover
i am His little one
i am His plaything
i am His slut
i am His pain bitch
i am His responsibility
He is my Daddy
He is my Dominant
He is my lover
He is my protector
He is my mentor
He is my tormentor
He is my safe place
He is my universe
i am His submissive
i am His lover
i am His little one
i am His plaything
i am His slut
i am His pain bitch
i am His responsibility
He is my Daddy
He is my Dominant
He is my lover
He is my protector
He is my mentor
He is my tormentor
He is my safe place
He is my universe
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Re: Daddy's girl
18th May 2013 8:39pm
I asume you are talking about a lover, yes that is something that can consume you whole. Nice Except if he really is your dad
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re: Re: Daddy's girl
Did you actually READ the poem? No, He is not my father and this is not incest fantasies or roleplay games. We have none of those although I am sure there are some who do have them. BTW - There is a whole subculture of BDSM that involves Daddy/little girl kinds of relationships. I think for the men it is wanting to spoil her but still needing to be the one in total control. For me, it is about my being able to let myself be completely vulnerable to Him and knowing He won't take advantage of that.
I call Him Daddy sometimes when I am feeling little or scared, but I in no way am ever picturing my own father - who died in 2005 - or pretending that He IS my Daddy. It is simply a way of expressing the fact that His first and most important jobs are protecting me, caring for me, and nurturing me.
I didn't receive attention and unconditional love from my father. I didn't feel protected or nurtured by my father. Yes I feel a void because of that and my "Daddy" Dom does help fill some of that void. There may be other baby girls who feel the same as me, but for most I don't think it is the motivation.
I call Him Daddy sometimes when I am feeling little or scared, but I in no way am ever picturing my own father - who died in 2005 - or pretending that He IS my Daddy. It is simply a way of expressing the fact that His first and most important jobs are protecting me, caring for me, and nurturing me.
I didn't receive attention and unconditional love from my father. I didn't feel protected or nurtured by my father. Yes I feel a void because of that and my "Daddy" Dom does help fill some of that void. There may be other baby girls who feel the same as me, but for most I don't think it is the motivation.
Re: Daddy's girl
19th May 2013 4:37am
did you intentionally start the first stanza with lower case i in each line?
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re: Re: Daddy's girl
Yes. In the world of BDSM, it is common for submissives to only be referred to in lower case and Dominants in upper case. Any poem I write in such a way is referring to my Dominant or how i feel about Him.
re: re: Re: Daddy's girl
19th May 2013 7:47pm
Thanks--- I never would have known that the world of BDSM extends to the way a sentence is structured.
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re: re: re: Re: Daddy's girl
19th May 2013 10:08pm
It does. In fact, some go so far as to use W/we or U/us when talking about themselves and a Dominant or a submissive. If I am writing to my Saint in private missives, I do not do that, but in anything that is for "general consumption" (i.e. anyone can read) or is specifically about our dynamic, I do use the "He/i" capitalization scheme as a sign of respect and deference. It's a little thing, but the little things are sometimes the most important!
Re: Daddy's girl
6th Jun 2013 2:59am
re: Re: Daddy's girl
6th Jun 2013 11:13pm
You think this is steamy? You need to go back and read some of my other stuff! ;)