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Even With
The noise fills my skull
Oh, so quickly
I feel lost and disoriented
Even with all the noise
The pain overflows within me
Making tears fall
I feel dead and hollow
Even with the pain
People horde around me
Causing shallow breathes
I feel desolate and alone
Even with all these people...
Oh, so quickly
I feel lost and disoriented
Even with all the noise
The pain overflows within me
Making tears fall
I feel dead and hollow
Even with the pain
People horde around me
Causing shallow breathes
I feel desolate and alone
Even with all these people...
Published 18th May 2013
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18th May 2013 2:39pm
are you standing in a subway station?? haha . Intense feel of angst and wonder! Great job Jaimee-Liegh,
It's great to see ya back!!
Cheers! Scot.
It's great to see ya back!!
Cheers! Scot.
26th May 2013 3:42pm
Thanks Scot. I'll tell you what now that school is out I am sooo happy to be back at the thing I do best
9th Aug 2013 9:11pm
You are also very well at it.
I hope you never lose hope in your ability to write poems for you are the best i know at poems.
:3
I hope you never lose hope in your ability to write poems for you are the best i know at poems.
:3
