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'Love Plea'
~this is as best I could recall it, a rewrite of a piece
I wrote when I was about 12 years old... Stayed in my head
becuz the girl I wrote it for, who I thought was ALL THAT
never knew it was MY thoughts...
becuz I gave it to some classmate (user) guy
who wanted her that she liked also
while never even seeming to now I existed~
I wanna...
hold you close
n' hold you tight
not let go
holdin' on
with all my might...
I wanna control you
not manipulate, cuz
I'm not the manipulatin'
kinda guy
what I mean is I...
wanna
blow warm words
like soft wet
kisses
with sweet wishes
so tender
that it makes you sigh...
can't you see
you lovin' me
makes me high?
so love,
will you please
come to me
make love
to me
passionately...
before I die?
I wrote when I was about 12 years old... Stayed in my head
becuz the girl I wrote it for, who I thought was ALL THAT
never knew it was MY thoughts...
becuz I gave it to some classmate (user) guy
who wanted her that she liked also
while never even seeming to now I existed~
I wanna...
hold you close
n' hold you tight
not let go
holdin' on
with all my might...
I wanna control you
not manipulate, cuz
I'm not the manipulatin'
kinda guy
what I mean is I...
wanna
blow warm words
like soft wet
kisses
with sweet wishes
so tender
that it makes you sigh...
can't you see
you lovin' me
makes me high?
so love,
will you please
come to me
make love
to me
passionately...
before I die?
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Re: 'Love Plea'
17th May 2013 11:58am
you around 12... WOW!...I would have fallen in love with you...lol... really great poem...
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re: Re: 'Love Plea'
17th May 2013 12:13pm
lol yea well I was the outsider among my peers becuz
I was always called 'an old man' becuz my mind
was always thinking deeply on world issues n such lol
n writing was always an escape since age 7 lol
Thank you n I would've loved to love you back lol
I was always called 'an old man' becuz my mind
was always thinking deeply on world issues n such lol
n writing was always an escape since age 7 lol
Thank you n I would've loved to love you back lol
Re: 'Love Plea'
17th May 2013 1:12pm
This is so heartfelt and tender and you were only 12... lovely Poetikmind :)
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re: Re: 'Love Plea'
17th May 2013 1:44pm
Yea maybe a few months younger or older but it's approx. n yea forever cursed to be a hopeless romantic lol
Thank you my sweetness, appreciate u! :)
Thank you my sweetness, appreciate u! :)
Re: 'Love Plea'
17th May 2013 2:09pm
re: Re: 'Love Plea'
17th May 2013 5:25pm
Yea the memories was always a haven
for me especially when I needed to escape reality lol
Thank u n I'm grateful as always for ur support :)
for me especially when I needed to escape reality lol
Thank u n I'm grateful as always for ur support :)
Re: 'Love Plea'
17th May 2013 2:32pm
So at 12 years old your mind was there already..all I got to say is Damn..I was still playing will dolls..lol
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re: Re: 'Love Plea'
17th May 2013 5:29pm
Yea I was called weird, I don't know but life was serious as hell for me n I thought many times that I wasn't supposed
be here becuz other kids made me feel like an alien lol
somehow I stumbled thru it all though lol
Thank u my dear lady, I appreciate you so much :)
be here becuz other kids made me feel like an alien lol
somehow I stumbled thru it all though lol
Thank u my dear lady, I appreciate you so much :)
Re: 'Love Plea'
Anonymous
17th May 2013 8:33pm
OMG, hon? This at 12? I was class nerd and shy back then - this would have made me blush and run...

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re: Re: 'Love Plea'
18th May 2013 5:07am
Lol aaaawwww yea I understand though I was called a nerd I never agreed with that, u loved learning BUT hated school lol
n if u ran I would've ran with ya lol thanks for the comment n support :)
n if u ran I would've ran with ya lol thanks for the comment n support :)
Re: 'Love Plea'
18th May 2013 1:42am
Very hard to believe you were only 12 and your mind was processing love so maturely!
What a crush! Nice....xo
What a crush! Nice....xo
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re: Re: 'Love Plea'
18th May 2013 5:10am
Yea I know but at 7 I thought I could save the world lol but it's the truth I watched how my dad n mom were n many others around me n it struck a deep emotion in me...
Thanks for the read n support sweetie :)
Thanks for the read n support sweetie :)