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Hitting Bottom
I'm swimming in a Smirnoff sea,
my friends are going to leave me be.
My deepest sorrows all escape me,
and I'm drowning in a Smirnoff sea.
It's getting colder,
all alone.
Nobody here,
an empty home.
I feel it prickling the back of my throat,
feel it chill me as I choke.
I'm hitting bottom, here, tonight,
and not a soul will see my plight.
Not one friend shall see me fight,
not a loved one to tell me I'll be alright.
I'm bathing in a Smirnoff pool,
feeling rather like a fool.
Remembering days when drinking was cool,
whilst I bathe in my Smirnoff pool.
I'm warming up now,
passing out.
Speaking the words,
that I want to shout.
I feel the sensation leave my skin,
I pray for a brand new day to begin.
I've hit the bottom, once and for all,
and there's not a single friend to call.
There is no farther left to fall,
All is done, and I've done all.
my friends are going to leave me be.
My deepest sorrows all escape me,
and I'm drowning in a Smirnoff sea.
It's getting colder,
all alone.
Nobody here,
an empty home.
I feel it prickling the back of my throat,
feel it chill me as I choke.
I'm hitting bottom, here, tonight,
and not a soul will see my plight.
Not one friend shall see me fight,
not a loved one to tell me I'll be alright.
I'm bathing in a Smirnoff pool,
feeling rather like a fool.
Remembering days when drinking was cool,
whilst I bathe in my Smirnoff pool.
I'm warming up now,
passing out.
Speaking the words,
that I want to shout.
I feel the sensation leave my skin,
I pray for a brand new day to begin.
I've hit the bottom, once and for all,
and there's not a single friend to call.
There is no farther left to fall,
All is done, and I've done all.
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