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Here is a poem from my 12yr old son. All criticism is welcome, put him on the rite path.
Kyle's poem
Kaboom Popped the balloon
The cow went moo
Because he needed a poo
Capow went the cow
The door flew open
As the floor wittened
As the clouds darkened
The lightening flattened me
So my hair was blackened
Kyle's poem
Kaboom Popped the balloon
The cow went moo
Because he needed a poo
Capow went the cow
The door flew open
As the floor wittened
As the clouds darkened
The lightening flattened me
So my hair was blackened
Published 15th May 2013
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Anonymous
29th May 2013 4:46pm
God this made me laugh, kids really do think of and say the darndest things.
