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.:Broken Sea; Mint:.
like wild water; out of order
rapids rapidly wrapping us up
that’s what was up
that undertow, so went the flow
rapid fire, then the sinking. wet
metaphor of a broken sea
breathtaking; a smell of mint
like she & it… tit for tat
her rat-atat-tat hit my tit
that was it
going over that edge; we
didn't hedge
that plunge we took
we went
faster & faster
straight
down
our approach
speeding up disaster
she being the blaster
her anger her master
my thinking
maybe; perhaps
I may out last her
her anger; crazy
absent of trust
surely it had me
for certain
had
us
carrying
us down
by
speeds
undetermined
the kind that's a warning
on a Sunday sermon
no parachute, no nothing
breaking down our descent
just a quick study of
what this fool really meant
nothing to me
but she couldn't forget
no talk; the sidewalk
broken cement.
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