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sulfuric
The sulfuric acid dripping from your tongue
is a rather charming ink
and that corrosive swing
of blatant impulse
quivering just past delusion
is beyond exhilarating
I feel I must confess
nude emotion bares no modesty
for the shivers forever imprinted
by a pair of twisted lips
trailing faint goosebumps with sweetened bitterness
and shamed desires
across flushed imagination
a cheshire mindset
suites the acquired taste
of an ambiguous poet
whose eccentric fingers
remain firmly electrical taped
in fear of paper cut encryption
I'm not much for romanticism
but I'm still a woman
attracted to the instability
of a sulfuric compound chemically imbalanced
and gradually eating away at my psyche
in that charming manner
is a rather charming ink
and that corrosive swing
of blatant impulse
quivering just past delusion
is beyond exhilarating
I feel I must confess
nude emotion bares no modesty
for the shivers forever imprinted
by a pair of twisted lips
trailing faint goosebumps with sweetened bitterness
and shamed desires
across flushed imagination
a cheshire mindset
suites the acquired taste
of an ambiguous poet
whose eccentric fingers
remain firmly electrical taped
in fear of paper cut encryption
I'm not much for romanticism
but I'm still a woman
attracted to the instability
of a sulfuric compound chemically imbalanced
and gradually eating away at my psyche
in that charming manner
Published 13th May 2013
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I had seen this in my comp and liked it, but not proper to comment there. I hadn't been familiar with you, and thats one of the reasons I like comps in general, is a chance to be exposed to new writers...you were one such pleasant writer...anyhow long intro
I like the write, I think that the sounds ride through briskly and nicely, and I think there is a nice subtle kinda math going on with the letters through the lines. You present the toxic charm in a contained enough way to see why you're attracted to it
I had seen this in my comp and liked it, but not proper to comment there. I hadn't been familiar with you, and thats one of the reasons I like comps in general, is a chance to be exposed to new writers...you were one such pleasant writer...anyhow long intro
I like the write, I think that the sounds ride through briskly and nicely, and I think there is a nice subtle kinda math going on with the letters through the lines. You present the toxic charm in a contained enough way to see why you're attracted to it
13th May 2013 6:57pm
You write with a finely tuned poetic flare,
that's individual to yourself and each word
you write. I think you're really coming into
your own.
This was my favorite stanza:
I feel I must confess
nude emotion bares no modesty
for the shivers forever imprinted
by a pair of twisted lips
trailing faint goosebumps with sweetened bitterness
and shamed desires
across flushed imagination
A very well written poem,
and one i'll keep coming
back to.
that's individual to yourself and each word
you write. I think you're really coming into
your own.
This was my favorite stanza:
I feel I must confess
nude emotion bares no modesty
for the shivers forever imprinted
by a pair of twisted lips
trailing faint goosebumps with sweetened bitterness
and shamed desires
across flushed imagination
A very well written poem,
and one i'll keep coming
back to.
