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Infinity
They say there is
Power in the tongue.
I cannot talk again
When with you.
I will just do.
I will spend time using
The aphrodisiac fluids
oozing from your nudity.
Tonguing your labia
With rhythmic persistence.
After I will push;
Thrusting deeply.
And if I hit capstone
Before time,
I'll use my tongue again...
Power in the tongue.
I cannot talk again
When with you.
I will just do.
I will spend time using
The aphrodisiac fluids
oozing from your nudity.
Tonguing your labia
With rhythmic persistence.
After I will push;
Thrusting deeply.
And if I hit capstone
Before time,
I'll use my tongue again...
Published 21st Oct 2010
| Edited 11th Feb 2016
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21st Oct 2010 11:55am
21st Oct 2010 3:43pm
21st Oct 2010 4:13pm
yes, this grabbed me first:
"I cannot talk again
When with you.
I will just do."
and the last line doesn't just end the poem, it keeps the mind wandering. very good. [:
"I cannot talk again
When with you.
I will just do."
and the last line doesn't just end the poem, it keeps the mind wandering. very good. [:
21st Oct 2010 4:23pm
21st Oct 2010 4:54pm
makes me think about times i was so overwhelmed i could not speak...very creative!
22nd Oct 2010 9:41am
Oh, I am glad to have made you reminisce. Thank God for poetry and thank you Robin, for your comment.
Thanks.
24th Oct 2010 7:43pm
Nicely accomplished, sir.
I really like "if I hit capstone before time" part. Very nice. I too am of this school of loving to please my lover first. But I haven't written about it. I think you've said all that was needed here.
I really like "if I hit capstone before time" part. Very nice. I too am of this school of loving to please my lover first. But I haven't written about it. I think you've said all that was needed here.
25th Oct 2010 7:37am
Thank you Pierre, for appreciating this poem.
I very much appreciate the liberty in this site and the open mindedness of the poets.
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9th Feb 2011 4:43pm
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10th Feb 2011 7:29am
You make my head swell, holdit, calling me pragmatic. Thank you very much.
Once she is happy, then there is peace at home. So I keep her happy by all means.
Once she is happy, then there is peace at home. So I keep her happy by all means.
